Proofreading
For any team, editing and proofreading is an integral part of content creation. All users must be able to access and understand the information we are publishing.
To ensure this, it must be:
- suitable for the audience
- easily understandable and accessible
- complete and free of errors.
Grammar and punctuation
The use of proper grammar and punctuation in writing indicates professionalism and competence and improves the readability and understanding of your content.
The Australian Government has a style manual to help with consistency across all government communication channels, and to make information easy to understand for everyone. Keep your content simple and clear, ensuring your writing style uses plain and inclusive language and an active voice where possible.
Different types of editing
The editing process has three levels, each with specific tasks for content development.
During a substantive edit, the editor will thoroughly review the content for clarity, coherence, and consistency.
A substantive edit may include:
- shortening sentences, replacing complex words with simpler words, and removing jargon
- checking the design/formatting
- improving navigation by reorganising content
- noting any gaps in the content
- rephrasing content to make it more understandable and consistent
- meeting specific government content requirements.
The copy editing process happens after substantive editing once the content is settled. In a copy edit, an editor checks for consistency, accuracy, and completeness. Before starting the copy edit, it's essential for the team to agree on its scope. During this process, any significant issues with the content may arise. The team must then decide how to address these concerns.
If additional substantive editing or rewriting occurs after the copy edit has been completed, another round of copy editing will be necessary.
As part of copy editing, an editor will ensure:
- style sheet consistency by correcting language issues
- references and citations follow the agreed-upon referencing style
- tone and voice inconsistencies are noted.
The copy edit also checks for issues or inconsistencies with:
- layout, design, and functionality
- illustrations, tables, headings, sequences, internal links, and other elements.
The purpose of proofreading is to ensure quality. It happens after the copy edit and is a final check for both visuals and text. It confirms that the content is correct, complete, and meets the organisation's requirements for publishing.
When proofreading, content is compared with a master copy before going live or being printed. The master copy is the current version of the text that has been approved.
To check for errors introduced by the proofreader, the master copy should be error-free.
Proofreaders compare the master copy with the:
- designer’s mock up
- developer's preview
- published content.
In each of these steps, the proofreader ensures nothing has been changed or missed.
It's better to proofread with two people
It's best for proofreaders to work in teams of two. The team consists of a copyholder, who reads aloud from the master copy, and a reader, who checks the final version for changes and errors and marks up the content. This method is particularly useful when reviewing complex, data-rich content like mathematical or scientific material, annual reports, or long financial tables.
Readability and comprehension
Developing effective web content starts with understanding how people read. People rarely read word for word, as revealed by Nielsen Norman Group's eye tracking studies.
Users scan instead of reading
Users primarily scan content, rarely reading all or even most of it. In fact, only 20 to 28% of a webpage is typically read. Users scan for keywords that can guide them to their desired information.
Use a clear structure to help readers understand the content. People need to find information quickly and easily. To determine if the content is relevant, they skim headings for ‘signposts' and consider other elements before reading, such as:
- headings
- links
- images
- tables
- lists.
Layout and typography play a crucial role in improving readability. A well-structured page with an easy-to-read font allows for quicker scanning and reading.
It's important to note that reading content on a screen differs from print. On smaller screens, like phones, people tend to scan the entire screen before focusing on text or other elements. On larger devices, they typically start at the center of the screen and scan left to right. Make sure the most useful content stands out on the page.
Tips for proofreading for accessibility
- Write clear page titles that align with the first heading on the page. This is crucial for screen reader users, as it is the first thing they will hear.
- Organise content with a clear structure using section headings. In their respective headings, describe the topics of the following sections.
- Make sure all content can be navigated in the intended order, regardless of the user's technology. Maintain consistency in navigation elements throughout the content.
- Page structure should not be solely determined by colour.
- Explain things without relying on sensory characteristics like shape, size, visual location, orientation, or sound.
Complex sentences
Reading complex sentences is harder than simple ones. You only need to focus on content briefly. Readers won't read everything. They decide if the content is relevant in seconds based on the page title and headings. Once they are on a page, they might only scan 20% of it before deciding whether to read more closely.
Tips for proofreading for accessibility
- Use plain and inclusive language when writing. All users benefit from this, and some find it essential.
- Level AAA requires a reading level equivalent to lower secondary education, typically achieved by Year 7 students between 12 and 14. Proper names and titles are excluded from this requirement.
- Make sure to avoid (or explain) uncommon words, phrases, and idioms. Whenever an acronym is used for the first time, it should be expanded.
How to test readability
You should include readability testing in your content workflow process – from creation through to review and publishing. You can use free tools such as:
Please note that any collection, storage, use and disclosure of information must comply with the Privacy and Personal Information Protection Act 1998 and the Health Records and Information Privacy Act 2002. Personal and health information should not be inputted or disclosed to public platforms and sites.
These tools will help you assess if your content is in plain English. They score its reading age level. Note you will need to convert US reading grades to the Australian-equivalent age. US grades 3 and 4 are equivalent to an Australian age 9.
Web Content Accessibility Guidelines success criteria
Resources
Support
If you need any assistance or have questions about the information on this page, please email us at digital.accessibility@customerservice.nsw.gov.au. To report an accessibility barrier with NSW Government’s online content, use our web accessibility report form.